< Previous Chapter Next Chapter >
The darkness receded and he was released, immediately spinning away from his captor. The elf took a step back from him, grinning and raising both hands—not a greatly reassuring gesture, as one still held that stiletto and the other the shadow-jumping talisman.
Ayuvesh whirled to behold a tall, robed figure approaching him from the corridor ahead. Finding himself apparently not under attack, for the moment, he chanced a glance around at his surroundings. There wasn’t much to see; he stood in a small, perfectly square chamber, unadorned except for a single wrought iron stand in one corner containing a modern fairy lamp which provided the only illumination. The walls, floor, and ceiling appeared to be all of one piece.
He did not know the name of the material, but he had seen it before. It had a grainy texture like rough stone, but reflected light like metal, and was impervious to every tool or weapon he had tested against it. Only the Infinite Order of old had built with this substance.
The figure approaching him reached up and lowered his hood, revealing an angular elfish face with eyes of solid emerald green. His long hair and neat little goatee were the same color.
“We have met before,” the dragon said, “but I regret that circumstances at the time did not permit a proper introduction. I am Khadizroth the Green. You have already met the Jackal. I apologize for the drama; it was an unfortunate necessity. I hope he did not indulge overmuch in…theatrics. He does have that tendency.”
“Yeah, I’m a real stinker,” the Jackal said cheerfully. “But, hey, least I’ve never assembled a child harem out of genocide survivors. Everybody’s gotta draw the line somewhere!”
Khadizroth’s head shifted minutely; Ayuvesh had the expression he was glancing at the elf, but without visible pupils or irises the movement of his eyes was impossible to track. The dragon’s expression did not alter, in any case.
“Where are we?” he asked with all the poise he could muster. “And, if you will indulge me in a second question, why have you brought me here?”
Khadizroth bowed slightly to him. “This is the most secure location I know. I used it as a lair centuries ago, before it was found by an adventurer. This individual and I had an understanding and he never returned here, nor revealed its secret, but nonetheless I moved elsewhere once a single uninvited soul knew of it. That is a dragon’s way. I have kept…an eye, so to speak, on this spot, in case I one day required absolute security, and I can attest it has not been breached since. It is quite safe and quite empty now, I assure you, but it was originally made by the Elder Gods. There is no possibility of scrying or communicating through its walls, except at my instigation from within. Only one who has been here before can shadow-jump inside, and arcane teleportation in and out is quite impossible. That is why your escort paused to engage in that pantomime of murder. He observed, during our previous visit to Puna Dara, that you seem able to communicate with your fellows, likely via those machine augmentations of yours. Once here, that is no longer possible. But now they, like the Punaji authorities, will believe you dead. I apologize for the distress this must cause.”
He bowed again, more deeply.
“I see,” Ayuvesh said slowly. It was, he supposed, a good sign that his abductors were being so forthcoming—at least, so far. “And as for the why…?”
“You’re dead!” the Jackal crowed. “Sorry, kid, nothing personal. Archpope’s orders.”
Ayuvesh turned to examine the grinning elf, not bothering to suppress his disdainful expression. The Jackal pursed his lips and made kissing noises at him.
“This entire situation requires some explanation,” Khadizroth said with much more courtesy. “I will, of course, help you understand everything I may. If you would accompany me?”
He stepped to the side, politely gesturing Ayuvesh forward through the square corridor.
Well, it wasn’t as if there was anywhere else he could go. He nodded back to the dragon with equal courtesy and paced forward as indicated. When he drew abreast of Khadizroth, the dragon fell into step beside him.
“There is, in terms of space, not much to see,” Khadizroth said, sounding oddly apologetic. “The cavern has six small outlying chambers, identical to the one we just left—which has been set aside for shadow-jumping in and out. Another is serving for sanitation. In a vault which is as thoroughly sealed as this one, that involves a convoluted arrangement of portable holes and water conjuration devices which requires no small amount of power crystals.”
“How creative,” Ayuvesh said neutrally, reasoning it was safest and wisest not to irritate his host with all the questions racing through his mind.
“The rest we mean to set aside for individuals, as a matter of privacy. When those run out, we will be reduced to erecting barriers to subdivide the main space. Which you now see before you.”
They had just emerged from the corridor onto a wide chamber which was mostly lost in darkness. A ledge of the stone-metal ran along one of its narrow ends; more square corridors opened off this. At intervals were set up iron stands holding fairy lamps, their glow lighting the ledge adequately but not penetrating far into the vast darkness spreading off in the other direction. Ayuvesh stepped forward to peer down; the ledge was about nine feet tall. Off to his left a set of wooden stairs descended do the chamber floor.
“Everything is in a very early state, as you can see,” the dragon explained. “With time and effort it will become much more comfortable. At the moment, however, quarters are unavoidably somewhat spartan.”
“It looks like a vehicle hangar,” Ayuvesh commented. His voice created a faint echo, now that they were standing in the huge main chamber. “Which suggests the main entrance is at the other end; the entire wall would open. I assume it is too buried in a rockslide or some such to function, otherwise all this would have been found ages ago.”
“You are a surprisingly educated man,” Khadizroth observed.
“In a few highly specific areas, I suppose so,” Ayuvesh replied, nodding graciously. “When might I be permitted to rejoin my followers, if it’s not too much to ask?”
The dragon nodded slowly, turning to gaze out into the dark, empty space. To Ayuvesh’s minor discomfiture, the Jackal had followed them out of the corridor and now lounged against the wall nearby, trimming his fingernails with his stiletto and grinning that unsettling grin.
“I cannot give you a definitive answer to that at this time,” Khadizroth said, “though I hope the final answer is not ‘never.’ We must all be prepared for the potential worst-case scenario.”
“That, I am still trying to determine.” The dragon grimaced bitterly. “You are here, Ayuvesh, because Archpope Justinian has commanded your death.”
Ayuvesh glanced over at the Jackal, who winked. “So I hear.”
“Therefore, you must remain dead, so long is he is aware—and his web stretches far indeed. The only way to ensure that Justinian is kept in the dark is to ensure that the world itself is.”
“The bomb may have been overplaying your hand, in that case,” Ayuvesh opined. “Such a measure is needless overkill for assassination; such a clever man as your Archpope will suspect it was meant to conceal a disappearance.”
“Oh, the bomb was his Holiness’s idea!” the Jackal said brightly. “He doesn’t want the Punaji thinking anybody knew or cared enough about you to send someone into their secure rooms and open your throat. But who knows what’s in all that hardware you’ve got strapped to your chassis, eh? Lacking any other explanation they may conclude you just malfunctioned and blew the hell up!”
“Anyone who thinks that is not giving Rajakhan nearly enough credit.”
“Hey, take it from an old pro.” The Jackal bowed deeply, flourishing his non-knife-holding hand out behind him. “Sometimes it’s just not possible to fully cover your tracks, in which case creating ambiguity and confusion is the next best measure.”
“We, as I presume you have surmised by now, serve the Archpope in a less than open capacity,” Khadizroth said. “Carrying out those of his orders which he does not wish connected to him. Some of such, anyway; he has many hands, most unknown to each other. We do this for two reasons: the Archpope is holding something over each of us, and more importantly, because we prefer to be close to him rather than hiding away in the hope that what he is planning simply fizzles out. Only by remaining active and nearby do we have any chance of creating an opportunity to thwart him.”
“And…” Ayuvesh slowly tilted his head. “What is the good Archpope planning?”
“That,” Khadizroth replied with a deep frown, “is a question which troubles me greatly. A person in his position, pursuing designs of the scale and complexity that he is, should be trying to simplify them. Consolidating power, eliminating rivals, controlling the situation. Justinian, in many ways, seems determined to do the opposite. Most prominently a cornerstone of his strategy appears to be keeping as many of his enemies alive and in positions to pester him as possible. He has repeatedly passed over opportunities to finish off a disadvantaged foe, and even arranged for some to receive much needed strokes of luck after suffering major setbacks. The only blood he seems willing to spill is that of his own agents, when their usefulness has ended.”
“And guess who gets to do the spilling,” the Jackal smirked.
“The heart of the problem with Justinian is that I cannot tell what he is attempting to do,” Khadizroth continued. “His machinations are too careful and too precise to be directed at stirring up simple chaos… But I fail, thus far, to see what other end result they could possibly have. He appears to want as many factions and powers in play as possible, in a state of maximum conflict with one another. Even his efforts to deflect their attention from him appear…begrudging, undertaken only when one becomes a true threat.”
“It looks a lot like he wants the whole world at his throat,” the Jackal mused, tossing his knife in the air and catching it. “Not right now, but at some point in the future. Fuck me if I can see why, though.”
“And so, here you are,” Ayuvesh mused, “tired of taking increasingly nonsensical orders, naturally wondering when it will be your turn upon the chopping block, and beginning to set up the pieces for an act of rebellion.”
Khadizroth nodded to him. “You are as perceptive as your reputation suggests, Ayuvesh.”
“I am as perceptive as any man who still has one working eye,” he replied sardonically. “Nothing about this situation is particularly subtle, now that I am in the middle of it. Let me ask you this: what was the Archpope trying to accomplish by manipulating my cult—and, I presume, the Punaji Crown?”
“The recent events in Puna Dara were only half that story, I’m afraid.” Ayuvesh turned at the new voice, finding himself approached by a man in a neat suit, with a neat beard, who had a Stalweiss complexion but spoke with a Tiraan accent. “A simultaneous debacle unfolded in Last Rock; I had the honor of a much closer vantage than I would have liked for that.”
“Ayuvesh, may I present Willard Tanenbaum, our first new recruit,” Khadizroth said politely. “A scholar of the Topaz College, and recently one of Justinian’s trusted, until he apparently outlived his usefulness and was slated for sacrifice.”
“Along with a great many of my fellows,” Tanenbaum said bitterly. “To answer your question, sir, his Holiness had recently come very close to open conflict with the Silver Throne. He has since been arranging opportunities to work alongside its agents. Purging the ‘corrupt’ from the Pantheon’s cults—specifically, those more loyal to himself than their gods, and no longer necessary to his plans. Setting up your Rust for a fall in order to have his agents build bridges with the Empire and, apparently, the Punaji.”
“All that carnage,” Ayuvesh whispered. “My friends, slain. My nation, brought to the edge of collapse. For a distraction.”
“So, yeah,” the Jackal drawled. “There’s a reason Justinian’s favorite pawns are pretty willing to turn on him.”
Slowly, Ayuvesh shook his head. “I certainly sympathize with your aims, gentlemen, but… I fear I have very little to offer you. These…” He held up his mechanical arm and pinged the nail of his other index finger against its hard surface. “…are now deprived of the essential power that maintains them. They will seize up, and cease to work. I do not know how soon, but it’s more than my arm and leg that are controlled by these machines. When those which replaced my heart fail, so will I. Little time have I left, and for every minute of it I will grow gradually less functional.”
“I am a green dragon,” Khadizroth said gravely. “Regeneration is within my power. It will not be quick, Ayuvesh. It will not be simple, nor easy. But your body can be restored. Your true body, the flesh and bone nature gave you. And indeed…with this done, you will find yourself much less confined. After all, you are very distinctive in appearance. I rather think people will not recall where they have seen you before, if they see you without those modifications.”
Ayuvesh stared at him. Tanenbaum simply raised an eyebrow, while the Jackal balanced the stiletto on his finger by its tip, wearing a manic grin.
“You said Mr. Tanenbaum was the first new recruit,” he said at last. “And I?”
“The second,” Khadizroth replied. “More will come.”
“And what will we do?”
“At this time, I cannot yet tell,” the dragon said patiently. “As I’ve said, it remains a mystery what our devious benefactor is doing, himself. But the longer it goes on, the more difficult it will become for him. Eventually—in fact, soon, I believe—a point will come…a fulcrum. One spot upon which all will hinge, and a swift, unexpected action will bring him to the ruin he has brought upon so many others. What I propose is that we take steps to ensure that when this happens, we are ready.”
“Ready. Yes. After all…” Ayuvesh nodded. “One can always become more.”
“So that’s the Tellwyrn.”
“Ugh.” Trissiny grimaced. “Please don’t give her a the, her ego is out of control as it is.”
“Well, of all the people on this world, I figure she is entitled,” Darius said, stepping up beside her on the wall. The Rock was awake by that hour of the morning, and her friends had begun to trickle out of their rooms in ones and twos, but whole groups had not assembled yet. They were poking about on their own, processing the events of the last few days in their own way. She was surprised to see Darius of all people up here; strolling the battlements seemed more a way for her to orient herself than he. Nonetheless, here he was.
They stood in comfortable silence for a few moments, watching Tellwyrn, Ruda, and Anjal have a conversation across the courtyard below, near the damaged front door of the Rock itself.
“So,” Darius said finally, “I guess you’ll be going back with the Last Rock people, huh.”
“Oh…not necessarily,” she replied lightly. “I took the whole semester off, so there’s really not much for me to do there. It’s been good to see everyone again, but I’ll see them in the fall. Don’t worry, I still plan to come back to Tiraas with you guys. I need to thank Glory and say goodb—”
“You need to go back where you came from.”
She broke off in surprise, turning to face him. Darius was still gazing down below, his expression empty.
“People like me, like us,” he said quietly, “people who aren’t paladins, or dryads, or witches, or half-demons, or… We get killed for being too close to you lot, and the kind of shit that follows you.”
“That isn’t fair,” she whispered.
“Course it isn’t,” he agreed, shaking his head. “It’s not fair, and it certainly isn’t your fault. It just…is what it is. I read all the same bard stories you did, growing up, I bet. Paladins always have companions, and the companions always die. Because that is what happens when you’re a squishy nobody who gets in the line of fire. That kind of fire. I learned something, yesterday, about how brave I am, and how brave I’m not.” He raised his head and turned to meet her eyes, unflinching. “If it was just me? Right now I’d be asking you to take me with you, wherever the hell you’re off to next. I am quite willing to die from getting into paladin shit I had no business going near. Hell, that’d be a nobler end than anything I’ve got planned for my life. But… It turns out I am not willing to watch that happen to any more of my friends. And definitely not to my little sister.”
He reached out to lay a hand on her shoulder. She hadn’t put on her armor this morning, nor even her leather coat as a concession to Puna Dara’s climate, and felt his grip clearly through her shirt.
“There’ll always be people willing to die for the cause, Trissiny. Just…do me a favor? Make sure the next guy that happens to knows what he was signing up for, before it happens.”
“Thank you, for everything…Thorn. You’re my hero, and that’s not an exaggeration.” Darius squeezed her shoulder, and gave her an affectionate little jostle. A tiny, sad smile flickered across his features. “Now go home.”
He released her, turned and walked away along the wall, unhurried, jamming his hands into his pockets.
Trissiny stared after him in something like shock. With her head turned to follow him leaving, she didn’t see Tellwyrn look up at her and sigh softly before returning to her own conversation.
Night always fell early on Mathenon, thanks to the Stalrange rising in the west. On this particular night, a storm had come with it—the kind that was all wind, occasional lightning, and no rain. The way weather behaved around the edge of the Great Plains, this wasn’t unusual, either. Nothing was really unusual. Sometimes it hailed in midsummer; the Golden Sea made a mess of air currents. Prairie folk had learned to put their heads down and endure.
All this made it a perfect night to while away in the pub with the gang, drinking and talking, as the sky howled outside.
The Fallen Arms stood in a somewhat rough part of the city, but it wasn’t a rough establishment. Neither boisterous nor dull, it had a dedicated clientele of hard-working men and women who liked to stop in and unwind after a day’s work; they liked stiff drinks, friendly conversation, and not having to deal with any foolishness. In Mathenon, “working class” most often meant accountants, House servants, or fancy private guards. The regulars at the Fallen Arms were a different breed; they worked with calloused hands and strong backs, and it was well within their ability to insist on some damn peace and quiet if some pushy lout wandered in and tried to start something. The proprietor encouraged them to do so.
“Now, don’t go puttin’ words in my mouth,” Roy said with mounting exasperation, pointing an accusing finger with the hand still holding his beer. “I didn’t say anything about joining the Huntsmen, I’ve already got a job. What kinda fool you take me for?”
“All right, fair,” Elsa replied agreeably. “But suppose your boy wanted to run off and join a lodge. What would you say to that, since you like ’em so much?”
“I dunno why you’re rarin’ to start a fight tonight,” Roy grumbled. “All I said was, they got their virtues, see? They ain’t totally without a point. How’d you get to me liking ’em so much from that?”
“I’ve got tits, that’s how,” she retorted. “Every time those pelt-wearing asshats come through town I have to deal with ’em talking down to me in a way you never have to worry about. This ain’t a theoretical exercise to me, Roy, or any woman, it’s you talkin’ out of your ass about stuff you don’t understand.”
“Now, I never said they didn’t have their bad sides, either!” he said, his voice rising defensively in pitch. “Come on, Elsa, you know me better’n that. All I’m saying is, some of that they have to say ain’t completely stupid. They’re all about self-reliance, an’ having respect for nature. What’s the matter with any of that?”
“What’s the matter is the bullshit it comes with!”
“Omnu’s balls, there’s no talking to you tonight,” Roy grunted. “Hey, Jonathan! Settle an argument.”
“Yeah, Jon, set this asshole straight,” Elsa chimed in, leaning around Roy to grin at the man seated on his other side at the bar, nursing a beer. “You’re the most level-headed guy here.”
He sighed, and rolled his eyes. “How many times do you think I’m gonna fall for that?”
“Oh, let’s not do this,” Elsa said dismissively. “You love playing the wise old man.”
“What do you mean, old?” he demanded, and she snorted a laugh in response. He had to grin back, despite his efforts to look offended.
Gods, he’d missed this.
Jonathan Arquin regretted none of the decisions he had made in life, even though they had made his lot hard in some ways. Now, though, things were looking brighter. The Church had relocated him out here to Mathenon for his protection, and had arranged a monthly stipend on which he could live very comfortably indeed, and never have to work.
He donated it every month to an Omnist shelter for the poor. Had to funnel it through a Vernisite temple in order to do so anonymously, which meant the Vernisites took a cut—six percent, the bloodsuckers—but that was a small price to pay for not having to explain why and how a man of his humble bearing could make such a generous gift on the regular. And whatever else could be said about bankers, they were admirably discreet people, particularly the religious ones. Meanwhile, he’d gone out and gotten a job.
A man was meant to work, otherwise, what was he good for? Work rooted him in the world, in society, kept him strong and centered and useful. And as an added bonus, it brought him this again, the kinship of other people who labored for a living. People who didn’t know about the demon and the child he’d had with her.
“Yeah, shut her up for me, Jon,” Roy added. “You don’t think the Huntsmen are totally bad, do you?”
Jonathan took a judicious sip of his beer before answering. “I can’t see anybody as totally bad, Roy, and that’s not a point for your argument. Not being an irredeemable monster is the baseline, not something a person gets praised for. Let’s face it, Huntsmen of Shaath are fanatical weirdos on their best day. Nobody who treats women the way they do is worth crossing the street to spit on, you ask me.”
“Thank you!” Elsa exclaimed, while Roy grumbled something and took a swig of his beer. He then sputtered on a mouthful of foam when she smacked him a little too hard on the shoulder. Jonathan almost missed the sound of the door opening in the ensuing playful scuffle, occurring as it did right in his ear.
The spreading silence was what warned him. Though they weren’t loud, or boisterous, the patrons of the Fallen Arms talked, and laughed, and drank. It was a place where people went for good company and good conversation. When the noise faded away, once table at a time, it meant something was up.
He raised his head, turning to examine the new arrival, and found himself staring like everyone else.
Mathenon was a city of merchants, and those who supported them; positioned on the single most important trade route between the inner provinces of the Empire and the mountain paths to Svenheim and Stavulheim, it was mostly inhabited by humans but saw its fair share of dwarves. It didn’t see many drow, however.
She paced slowly across the floorboards, the gnarled ebony staff in her hand making a rhythmic thunk each time she set it down, deep red eyes scanning the room as if searching for something. Dressed in pure black, both her leather trench coat and the robe underneath it, she cut a dark swath through the rustic ambiance the Arms cultivated. Her hair, though, had a streak of livid green dyed down the center, marring the white.
By the time she reached the bar, total silence had fallen upon the tavern, every eye fixed upon the drow woman, which she gave no sign of noticing. Slowly, she glided along the row of stools, feet soundless and only the butt of her staff making noise to mark her passing. She stepped past Jonathan, past Roy, then paused.
Elsa stiffened, but the dark elf turned and went back a few steps, this time stopping right behind Jonathan, who had turned around on his stool to study her direction.
She gave him a slow, insolent once-over, then nodded as if deciding on something.
“You,” the drow ordered. “Buy me a drink.”
Jonathan tore his gaze from her crimson eyes to glance at Roy, who shrugged helplessly.
He cleared his throat. “Lost your wallet, have you?”
One corner of her lips twitched upward. “This isn’t my first visit to the Empire. I know the custom in bars like this. The man buys the woman a drink. Or are you refusing me?”
She raised one snowy eyebrow, the expression somehow challenging.
Jonathan studied her right back, with the same measured impertinence. She was, it occurred to him, quite pretty. But hell, she was an elf; they were all pretty. He hadn’t known a lot of elves, and even fewer drow, certainly not enough to make a mental comparison. It was unnerving, having no idea how old she was. By her looks, she could’ve been barely out of her teens…which meant she was just as likely to be as old as the Empire. What might a creature like this have seen in her life?
“No offense,” he said at last, “but lady… You’re kind of scary.”
The drow tilted her head to one side in an inquisitive gesture, still maintaining eye contact. After another beat of silence, she smiled.
“Perhaps. But you still haven’t refused, I notice. Maybe you like that in a woman?”
He narrowed his eyes very slightly.
She did the same.
“Hey, Eliott,” Jonathan said at last, still looking at the dark elf and not the bartender he was now addressing. “Pour something…sweet, fruity, and pink. With a little paper umbrella if you’ve got any.”
“Sure, Jon,” Eliott said, deadpan. “And for the lady?”
A few chuckles from around the room broke the tension, and the drow herself grinned broadly in mischievous delight. The expression transformed her entire face.
Grinning back at her, Jonathan Arquin experienced the familiar feeling that he was about to make an excellent series of mistakes.
43 thoughts on “13 – 53”
DOWN TO SEVEN MISSED CHAPTERS
BOOK 13 NOW OVER
LikeLiked by 9 people
Ok, I like Gabe’s dad already. Sass and Generosity.
LikeLiked by 10 people
So I have been reading on and off for some time now. I think I started reading when you were back in book 7 or so. I almost never comment, as I wait until a lot has built up before binging through it.
But honestly, I just need to say. I love this series. I love the western dnd stuff. I love the forgotten tech from abusive precursors. I love the nerdy group making a world. I love the Easter eggs. I…
Honestly I could go on. But frankly, this is my favourite story, I would go as far as saying my favourite out of all forms of art I enjoy.
You have created a beautiful world. An intriguing plot. You are, to put it succinctly, just the bees knees.
I’ve seen some comments, including your own stating flaws. I disagree. I may be an outlier, I’m not sure, but I love and will continue to love every chapter I read.
So. Continue being awesome. Do what makes you happy. I hope you read this. I am an awestruck, lifelong fan.
LikeLiked by 14 people
I have to agree with what you said. 🙂
Also, 2nd place on TWF!
Huh, this and A Practical Guide to Evil finished a book on the same day. Nice coincidence. (Also lots of epic reading :))
LikeLiked by 4 people
Natchua and Gabe’s dad… this will end well.
Ayuvesh might become useful later on, but I agree with Big K… I have no idea what Justinian is really planning.
Hmm….does she know this is Gabriel’s dad? What could she possibly want with him?
Since she was off looking for allies against Lily almost certainly she knows who he is.
Presumably there is something about his relationship with Gabriel’s mum that has drawn her interest. We know not all of hell is loyalist and Natchua was in contact with a Priestkiller who was playing both ends against the middle.
This does lead to the thought of an armour plated demon in a trenchcoat slipping into Jonathan’s kitchen and saying “Listen very carefully, I shall say ‘zis only once!”, before outlining another plan to slip stranded anti-Ellialist Demons back into Hell (or stranded Strike Team members back out of hell).
Though I suspect Nachtua is making a bid to be Michelle here, which suggests Gabriel’s mom is more Yvette.
LikeLiked by 1 person
So, Natchua and Gabe’s dad together in a bar… interesting, very interesting. I wonder if Vidius watches over the elder Arquin, and if so, what he’d think of this development.
Oh, and of course, great chapter as usual!
Wouldn’t suprise me if some of the Valkyries keep watch on him to have reasons to talk to Gabrial.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wednesday chapters make my day. Vote now.
Might Ayuvesh be a Justinian loyalist? If the pope really does want everyone against him, then Ayuvesh might be on his orders. Wait, no, Justinian said that the Rust the drow’s plan.
So why doesn’t the gang suspect it though? After all, all they know is that Justinian allegedly wants him dead.
Also it seems a lot of people think my relatively minor criticism means I hate the story or something. At worst I’ve criticised some parts of the prose.
That was a bit uncalled for on Darius’ part. Not that I don’t respect his desire to protect his sister, but would it have changed anything even if she did tell them ahead of time? I don’t really think so.
LikeLiked by 2 people
It was a low blow, as he seemed to be alluding to Ross’s death, yet none of that adventure had anything to do with her being a paladin.
LikeLiked by 3 people
One does not simply stop being a paladin. It draws shennanigans to her. It’s likely they wouldn’t have made it to that precarious position if Trinity didn’t have such a deep connection to the sisterhood and high position in the legions (Basra certainly recognized her status, even if not overtly).
LikeLiked by 1 person
I meant “Trissiny” . I am le derp.
I’m going to throw out a theory for Justinian’s plot. I remember (don’t ask me when) that somebody once said that if anybody tried to attack the Archpope directly it would bring the immediate retaliation of the Pantheon, not to mention whatever it is exactly Justinian has done to them to essentially make himself above reproach (Or oversight, apparently)
In which case, it could be that Justinian wants everybody he could possibly get to be at his throat, but not quite in a position to go for it until the maximum possible amount of enemies has been established. Only after he’s incensed them to some extraordinary degree would he want them to all team up against him, inviting the immediate action of the pantheon against them (Which, I imagine, he would somehow harness for whatever plan of ascension he has, personal or humanity-wide)
I’m also going to throw out the personal worry that this will be the moment Tellwyrn sacrifices herself to stop it, going out in her final blaze of old-school heroic glory – possibly to then be interfered with by her students, sticking with the theme that old-school heroics just aren’t this era’s thing.
The only problem is that I can’t see how Elilial’s plans come into things, unless it’s just a case of wires crossing and her plan’s been in the works for much longer.
What do people think?
I think that Trissiny and Juniper once turned Avei against Naia without even trying. What would happen if someone did it on purpose?
A thought- if Justinian provokes the godhands to come against him while wreathed in the mantles of divinity, would those self-same divines protect him… against themselves? What kind of rituals could he access with the New Gods on his side? Alternatively, what kind of tech could he access with both Naia and Scillith’s credentials?
My theory about Justinian is much simpler than that. If most of his actions don’t make sense to you, instead of thinking you’re missing something, maybe they actually don’t make sense! His large-scale plan is just a distraction from his real plan, which only a small % of his orders actually apply to.
Also, it’s good to finally have confirmation Ayuvesh is one of the ones with nanites replacing essential organs. I suspected so for a long time, and thought it was odd he didn’t admit it earlier.
My theory on Justinian’s plan is that he was nearly entirely truthful about wanting to raise everyone up to godhood. Everyone except himself. As the only remaining mortal, the ‘paladin’ effect would basically put him in charge of the world.
That’s a fun idea. I’m not sure how it would work, it would help if we understood more about what an Archpope’s relationship to the gods really is. Are there formal–or at least consistent–rules governing that relationship? It’s been strongly suggested that there are in some form, and that most gods are ignorant of this. How did Justinian find out? Even Eserion and Vesk may not be aware of all of the rules, and Justinian’s experiments with Elder Tech don’t seem nearly advanced enough to initiate that kind of change. How much of this relationship is consensual upon a particular god choosing to be a part of the pantheon, for example, and what are the consequences of leaving the pantheon? Do Archpopes have to be made in a ritual at all similar to the one for Imperial Hands, and does that mean the individual involved is granted something that can’t easily be revoked? Which of these questions is even important?
And now of course, I wonder when Gabriel will find out about this newest development.
I loved the scene with Darius. That’s the sort of genre subversion this story does so well and the sort of implications most other stories sweep under the rug.
You mentioned earlier that this book had too many plot threads (not surprising with a story that has too many characters (yes, yes I’ll let that be)), and I definitely agree, but it ended very very strongly.
Assuming bardic stories in setting follow Elder God geekdom for tropes, Darius is being unfair. Every tragedy needs someone to play Horatio, and it sure as hell isn’t going to be the paladin. Obviously, party bard is the safest role to play, but the rogue is almost as good. He has a last name, can’t be a redshirt.
Gabe’s dad, has got it going on
I read all the way to somewhere around 13-10 by scraping the site and downloading to my ereader a couple months ago. Still here. Might as well say something.
Thanks for writing.
“an excellent series of mistakes” is such an evocative term, it would make a great title for someone’s memoirs, or maybe a Wodehouse retrospective.
I am absolutely amazed that a Google search for “an excellent series of mistakes” gets precisely one hit. This page.
LikeLiked by 3 people
Or now I think of it, a Culture Ship name. “ROU An Excellent Series of Mistakes”.
With a sister ship: ”A Series of Inoculations Against Foot-In-Mouth Disease”. 😉
Would almost be shocked if one of the Infinite Order didn’t have at least ane ship following that naming scheme parked under Tiiras.
I’m imagining all their ships being named USS Enterprise, Red 5, Heart of Gold, etc.
Wait which kind of ship is everyone talking to? I can’t tell when it switched from romantic ships to actual ships
Eh, as far as I’m concerned, any good one-liner is a decent excuse to name a new Culture Ship (too bad there won’t be any more from Mr. Banks *sad sighs*).
Although, An Excellent Series of Mistakes does not exactly strike me as a name a ROU would pick. Their names tend, if memory does not betray me, to contain more gravitas … or puns …
I don’t think Culture ships care much about gravitas, and technically it doesn’t say *whose* mistakes are about to be made.
True, they don’t care much for gravitas. Unless of course, it makes for a good pun.
On the other hand, since I’m already thinking spaceships, I now wonder if the “Natchua and Mr. Arquin” ship might be like something that could possibly be glimpsed on the bridge of the Orville every once in a while.
A tremendously generous donation came in today! The epilogue for this volume will be up Monday, so looks like next Friday (and the one thereafter) will have continued chapters.
I have reconsidered my plan to take a break after Volume 4 finished up. I’m not going to keep pushing Wednesday chapters until the story proper resumes, though. I have a few weeks’ worth of bonus chapters planned, as a sort of palate cleanser and to give me time to get Book 14 ready.
LikeLiked by 1 person
This drow has got to be nachtua right?
Is this the story where prophecy is described as a future event having so much weight or import that it causes pressure to build up in time, and the prophecy itself is like a venting of that pressure? Or was that from something else? Honest question, I don’t know how to google this.
Serious answer: You’re thinking of Harry Potter.
Comments are closed.